Monday, April 27, 2009
गोधूलि किरण
चलते चलते आकर ठहर गयी
अपने ही चौखट पर गोधूलि किरण;
गुमसुम सी मन ही मन में कर रही
घड़ी-घड़ी, पहर-पहर का मूल्याँकन.
भोर की बेला बड़ी सुहानी थी
मैं भी थी कोमल-कोमल शीतल-शीतल;
ओस की बूंदों के संग अठखेलियाँ
थिरकती थी हवा के संग बिन पायल.
दोपहर में जब प्रचंड भास्कर
तपा रहा था सारे विश्व को;
मैं भी बन कर तब अग्निशिखा
बचा रही थी स्वयं के अस्तित्व को.
यह तो सब विधि के हाथ है
किसे कितनी प्रभा और कितना तम्;
कर लिया स्वीकार दोनों अंश को
गोधूलि है प्रकाश-तिमिर का संगम.
- किरण सिन्धु
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13 comments:
:-) Finally I have got your blog up & running...YAY!!! And I am the first one to comment...Nitin se pehle :P. Now write more & more & you will surely get many readers who will love your creations. All the best!
Gr8 Job Mummy. Keep it up. Now you have to write at least 1 poem in a week and post it. We'll desperately week every week for a fresh poem. :-)
This was Nitin...forgot to add my name.
namaste aunty, this poem is beautiful..
please write often..i will keep coming back here to read it..
take care aunty..
दोपहर में जब प्रचंड भास्कर
तपा रहा था सारे विश्व को;
मैं भी बन कर तब अग्निशिखा
बचा रही थी स्वयं के अस्तित्व को........
....
इसी एहसास को आज भी बनाकर रखना है.....
किरण दी,
अब आपको पढ़ती रहूंगी....
namaste aunty,
bahot hi achchhi poem hai..padh ke bahot sukoon sa laga.
aanchal and abhishek
bahut acchi poem ha aur woh to bahut hi badhiya lagi jo Kavvyanjali par chaapi ha, bilkul mere man ki baat aapne apne shabdo me likhi ha, will keep coming here to read not only poems but you views on any other thing.
aunty kudos to u for bouncing back and that it too in such a beautiful and graceful way..lookin forwrd to your next piece of work..
lots of love from ur 2nd daughter :)
You have the ability to force the reader to think...which is awesome. Amazingly nice n I'm so...so glad to see you here.....Will be eagerly waiting for more :)
Namaste Aunty,
Your poem is really nice.Bahut depth hai aapke dono poems mein.I m surprised aapki ab tak koi book publish kaise nahi hui.
Ab jaldi jaldi dher saari kavitayein likhiye aur apne blog par daal kar humko bhi padhne ka mauka dijiye...
Ashu & Neha
namaste aunty,
aapki writings mein bahot genuine feelings hoti hain..padh ke bahot achchha lagta hai..mann ekdam relaxed ho jata hai....apni writings magazines mein bhi bhejiye.
aanchal
hello Aunty,
beautifully said, i like the contrasts and how you have brought them together, the sense of self is beautiful
indira
Excellent Madam
"Sab din hot na saman"
Bidyakar Prasad (Monu)
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